四年级英语作文范文15篇「人教版小学英语四年级作文掌握要领跟着达达老师轻松学」

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1、My English Teacher

Miss Tang is my Englishteacher. She’s very pretty. She is tall and thin. Shehas two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes cats very much.And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. We often playgames in English classes. She is very kind to us. We all love her.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”,是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作者开门见山,直接点题,首先介绍了英语老师的姓名,然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。

同学们们在写作文时,要注意使用自己最熟悉的词[组],以免写出一些错句子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规范等。

2、My weekend

There are two days on theweekend, Saturday and Sunday. On Saturday, I often go to my dancing class inthe morning and do my homework in the afternoon, and I often help my mother dosome cleaning. On Sunday, I always visit my grandparents in the morning and dosome reading in the afternoon. After dinner, I often watch TV with my parents.At that time, we can talk with each other and say something happily. We oftenhave a good time.

  

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写法:这篇习作是按照时间顺序记叙周末的活动,记叙了周六和周日的上午和下午分别做了哪些活动及对活动的感受。

即:周六上午:舞蹈课→下午:做作业和帮妈妈做清洁→周日上午:看望祖父母→下午:阅读→晚上:看电视,与父母交流→感受:高兴和愉快。

我们还可以选取周六和周日中的几个比较主要的活动来写,先说明什么时间在什么地方由什么人做了什么事,有什么感受。再按照活动顺序把活动内容写清楚,最后抒发一下对这次活动或这个周末的感想。

时态:这篇短文我们可以用三种时态来写: a.一般过去时(主要描述你上个周末是怎样度过的);b.一般现在时(主要描述你经常怎样度过周末);c.一般将来时(主要描述你要怎样过周末)。这里我们来表述平时是如何过周末的,所以采用一般现在时来写。

注意:活动的相关表达方法可采用旧知识,eg.(例)起床get up,和新知识,eg. Climb mountains去爬山中的un很容易错写成nu。还要注意不要出现病句,eg. “Ioften watch TV with my parents.”不要写成 “I often with myparents watch TV .” 词量上控制在50 ~ 80 之间。

3、My Village

My village is verybeautiful. There are many houses in the village. Near the village, there is aforest. A small river is in front of the village. The water in it is veryclean. We can see some fish in the river. Near the river, you can see amountain. Some flowers and grass are on the mountain. I like my village.Welcome to my village!

 

 

【要领点评】

本文以“我的村庄”为题描述了自己家乡的风景。介绍了村庄的房屋、森林、河流及大山,使人看了这篇作文后确实感觉到“我的村庄”的美丽。小朋友们在写作时,可仔细想一下自己的村庄或所在城市的特点,尽量使用本单元学过的单词或短语进行叙述。

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